Ok first off...Chris don't hate me. Please. Life is crazy...anywho.
Claims
In my paper I make the claim that the Helaman Halls visiting hours should be changed. And not only the hours, but I also claim that the days shouldn't be just Sundays and Wednesdays. Another one consists of the administration and that they should let us choose not only the days but the times as well. My final claim, and thesis, is if the men are allowed in the rooms somedays, they should be allowed in the room all days.
Reasons
Some of my reasoning includes that there is no difference from one day of the week to the next. Also I stated that Heritage Halls can have guys in their dorms as much as they want. As well as working on finding the Wyview visiting rules and regulations. Another reason consisted of believing in free agency which should qualify us to choose the days and times for that matter that the guys come "visit".
Assumptions
I think my first assumption is really that people living in Helaman Halls are bothered by these visiting times. I make it sound like we are all on the same page about this policy. I noticed another assumption is that people are supporters of free agency (not too hard to assume). Also, that my audience cares to be equal with Heritage and Wyview. Hmmm...what else? I seem to struggle with this one the most. The last assumption that I can think of is assuming the intentions of the administration a little here and there.
I think visiting hours are great, but they should be everyday.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree! I find it a little strange that the hours aren't the same everyday, but it is the same in Heritage, which stinks.
ReplyDeleteI (having read the full version) can honestly say that you make really good points. There are fun parts to keep the paper exiting, evidence for logos, and you actually experienced it for Ethos. Your paper has every thing Chris said and it was really fun to read! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou know, I live in Helaman halls and quite honestly they're not that bad. In fact sometimes I find myself wishing they were even more strict (don't hate me!) just because I get woken up by people at 3 in the morning all the time from people coming in from people coming in from late visiting.
ReplyDeleteDo you know the reason why the visiting hours are the way that they are? I don't, and I was just wondering if you did because you don't really talk about the counter-argument.
ReplyDeleteHaha Brannon come on :) no i don't hate you but people come in at 3 in the morning because they feel the need to rebel since the visiting hours are so strict! if they were changed people wouldn't do that..ha just kidding i made that up. But you really hear people come in that late?
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